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Robin started to cry, fat tears dripping down his cheeks as Mark smiled and so did Amanda.
"I think we all love that right baby?"
Mark looked to Amanda who simply nodded at the therapist smirking.
"I do have one condition though Robin, even though you're a boy you're going to be a stay-at-home girlfriend. I am sure your wife can help teach you. I guess we are going to need a bigger bed for all three of us."
Mark winked as Robin ran up wrapping his arms around Mark's waist and looking up smiling breathing in his friend's scent for the first time. Excited, happy and unable to contain his excitement. He wasn't exactly sure where things would head, but he was excited for them, nonetheless.
- COMMENTS
33RPMVinylPants6 months agoFetish aside (feminization is really not my thing, but whatever floats your boat), one place you could really work on is your pacing and descriptions.
We got a more detailed description of a shower than we did of the surgical procedure or of the blowjob immediately after. Everything that happens is described in the exact same tone, so we (as readers) don't really get a sense of what's supposed to be the focus of the story.
Also, switching points of view without warning or formatting indications is jarring, to say the least.
It's clear that you care about this and have an imaginative take on it, but your vision is lost in your prose.
Keep at it, and check out the literotica forums for an editor to help you.
Anonymous6 months agoI am so sick of these stories where the wife or girlfriend love their significant other but need to fuck others so they take a fairly intelligent male and destroy his life by either switching his gender or cucking him or even turning him gay. If that’s love then you can keep it.
