All Comments on 'Welcome Home'

Very nice descriptive writing. You definietly had your heart and head in it. Keep writig.

wish my girl had greeted me like that when i got home....

Well done this is excellent writing, I think you are a talented story teller. Please write some more.

great story! There is nothing like the first fuck after a deployment! They make for the best sexual memories, and daydreaming throughout the deployment! You totally captured the heat of the moment! Yummy!

If all our fighting men had women waiting for them like her then this world would be a lot emptier cuz they mow them down to get home faster!

All of our returning servicemen and women should be greeted like this. 5 stars.

And with that they fell asleep, wrapped in each other's arms and smiling for the first time in months.

Can not be both

Great story, wonderful writing skills. You captured the moment so well. As stated prior, every person in the service deserves a welcome home like this.

To the anonymous person who could only see the flaw between the years in the beginning of the story and the months at the end.....seriously? that's all you could say?

i love these kind of stories :) its very sweet but there were some errors. in the beginning the wife is described wearing a skirt and then later u say that he ripped off her pants. u were talking from the wifes point of view throughout the story until the very end when all of a sudden its completely narative. u say "they" when u shld hav stayed in the point of view of the wife and said "we". other than those i think its a great story. very loving and romantic