by saraceleste
Your writing is amazing! I liked the more casual relationship, as in D/s is for special.occasions. That's rare.for a lit story, and helps to show all types of relationships. Your characters are sweet and adorable, I hope we can read more about them.
Excellent scene of special occasion loving D/s between only spouses. Very erotic. Your level of description is perfect. I would very much love more stories about this couple, or at least in this style.
Safewords, checking in, not 24\7 and just comfortably realistic, yet hotter than most of the wannabe crap here could ever achieve. Good job.
Really well-written story. Realistic, empathetic characters, telling detail, great pace and genuinely erotic. A rare treat, thank you and please write more.
Sara this is Remy Scott. Love the vivid imagery and details in your description. Such a lovely scene you set for us. My cock could feel your cunt squeeze as he entered you. Please continue, such a lovely scene.
More good writing!! You do the loving D/s thing very well!! EXCELLENT