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Black_JadeBlack_Jadeabout 8 years ago
Loved it

Your writing is amazing! I liked the more casual relationship, as in D/s is for special.occasions. That's rare.for a lit story, and helps to show all types of relationships. Your characters are sweet and adorable, I hope we can read more about them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
spot on

Excellent scene of special occasion loving D/s between only spouses. Very erotic. Your level of description is perfect. I would very much love more stories about this couple, or at least in this style.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Safewords, checking in, not 24\7 and just comfortably realistic, yet hotter than most of the wannabe crap here could ever achieve. Good job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great job!

Very hot, I look forward to reading more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Seriously hot

Really well-written story. Realistic, empathetic characters, telling detail, great pace and genuinely erotic. A rare treat, thank you and please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Holy shit

It was soooooo good, I reached orgasm almost instantly. Thank u

THIRDCOASTTHIRDCOASTabout 8 years ago
Well done Sara

Sara this is Remy Scott. Love the vivid imagery and details in your description. Such a lovely scene you set for us. My cock could feel your cunt squeeze as he entered you. Please continue, such a lovely scene.

DreaMajorDreaMajorover 3 years ago
Lovely

Spicy hot and sweet!

StrappySandalsStrappySandalsabout 2 years ago

More good writing!! You do the loving D/s thing very well!! EXCELLENT

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I enjoy writing and reading smut. If you like what I write or have feedback or comments, I'd enjoy hearing from you.