All Comments on 'Welcome Home, Sir'

The name "Word Girl" suits you well! An excellent first submission, to be sure. Very descriptive writing that makes me want to read more from you. FIVE STARS!

Sigh and a stretch. Mmmmmm. Nicely done and welcome to Lit.

I'm not a fan of the sub/dom thing, but if this is the first thing you've ever written I'm very impressed. Not only technically well done, but very hot as well!

I saw your post in the New Story Advertisement thread

This is a well-written D/s vignette that does a nice job of showing their emotions rather than telling. I would enjoy reading something longer where you could really turn your imagination loose. Good work.

Beautifully written - a story for lovers.

Hope you keep writing... enjoyed your first submission.

Thanks for sharing. Not many things are worse then sleeping single in a double bed. God bless.