All Comments on 'Welcome Home Son Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Outstanding. Hopefully there are additional chapters forthcoming.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Of all the incest genres I'm a big fan of the mother/son relationships. And of course, if two consenting adults love one another the natural progression would be for them to have a child together.

My sister and I have been lovers since high school. She was two years older than me and a virgin. In the Latino culture the man has more freedom to chase pussy. But the woman is expected to remain a virgin till she married. It is more of a cultural thing than a thing of reality. My sister is hot, but mom kept an eagle eye on her, and she concentrated on finishing her senior year to head down to San Diego State University where she wouldn't have mom to watch over her and she would then start dating. I had an inclination that Jo was a virgin and that if I played my cards right that I could possibly find out if she was indeed a virgin and if she was, I might be the one to take her cherry.

As life has a way of working out for you....we did end up being lover and yes....I was the man to take her sweet cherry.

Ocean33Ocean33over 1 year ago

Wonderful story I hope this isn't the end

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Beautiful story, makes me want to cum right now

HotforwomenHotforwomenover 1 year ago
Keep going, but.....

Your chapters need to be longer than one page.

Other than that you keep switching between cum and sperm. So decide which you want to use.

5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Not a fan of stories that switch POV.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Just a little more than an outline

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved both parts. Beautiful story hope you write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice story, but wish son and mom were a bit younger. Then she could sprout a baby bump!

londonteadrinkerlondonteadrinkerover 1 year ago

Excellent. I hope there is more to come...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Enjoyed that very much. Looking forward to next story.

Maybe trip together as couple, another woman recognizes them.

Or they visit her Mom and mom/daughter talk about what it would be like for them both to have a baby.

Daughter teaches mom to suck cock with help of son.

Just a few ideas.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awesome story but you stopped just when it was getting good!! You need to continue it cause it was to short!! Still gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A dream ending. Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Very nice story but it was a bit short, you need to write further into it. Gave it 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Awesome but you stopped to soon you need to continue it was a bit short maybe mother will get pregnant I love it when a mother has his children? Gave it a 5

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Good story but it was to short you need to write more and see how their lives develop into a happy union and maybe some children?? 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Liked the story very much but I thought you ended to soon you should have had mom become pregnant and they lived together as husband and wife gave it a 4 cause it was short

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Very good but you should continue further with this relationship and see where it goes, 5 stars

MfkndragonMfkndragon9 months ago

Not so good your writing skills needs some serious work you need to learn what details is so far I have not read a story from you that could even be accepted as average combined with all the issues you have on writing your lack of writing skills can't even be ignored I suggest taking writing classes to get a little more writing skills before trying to write another story

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