All Comments on 'Welcome to the Neighborhood Ch. 05'

Loving the new emotional side of the story. Minor grammatical errors or misspelling, but over all very good. Now give us more, tell us about his wife, will they take their new relationship further? Keep it coming. Thanks

Thank you for having posted your stories. Enjoyed all of yours.

One point I would like to add is about your use of the verb, "lie".

I am sure you have your own proof-reader or editor. But, when you use the intransitive verb, "lie" (as lying down), the past tense is "lay", NOT "lied" and the past perfect tense is "lain." Please remember Lie > Lay > Lain.

Many writers and non-writers nowadays misuse the intransitive verb "lie" and the transitive verb "lay," but, hope you will use them correctly. If you use the transitive verb as laying yourself down, then, the past tense is "laid" and the past perfect tense is also "laid." Lay > Laid > Laid

Keep up the good work!