All Comments on 'Welcome to the Neighbourhood'

More please. Interesting slant on discipline

This story really should have been in the transsexuals category

It is a good start but will it continue? The next chapter should be longer and have more details. Overall it’s well written a bit more editing but still a good read . Thanks for sharing.

I would love to read more. This is very hot.

I’m guessing that this won’t be the cup of tea for the majority of readers in this category, but I liked it a lot! While brief, this is very well-written, and I’m intrigued to see where you take it. Ignore the votes and keep writing!

Oh my god this is fucking amazing, very much looking forward to seeing future installments.

Hot! Can't wait for the next episode!! Would love to see the illustrated version. Can't wait for the family threesome that is sure to follow. Plenty of potential for family swapping and orgies. Would love to hear about other families in this "unique" community.

Like ErrantZebra said... really not my cup of tea, but very well written. Good job!

More please...

I really enjoyed the story. I’m hoping that there’s more to it because I would love to hear what happens with Jake.

Thank you all for the feedback! Good or bad, I appreciate it and it all helps. I am hard at work writing a second chapter as well as thinking about other stories.

Crap

Great start! Please continue!,,

Off to a good start, I'll look forward to more!

Great first story. Don’t stop here. Keep writing.

Great first story. Don’t stop here. Keep writing!

PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY!! SO FUCKING HOT!!