All Comments on 'Were in the City Ch. 24'

Scheming and yet more scheming. Jessie can prove she is the Richard Alpha because she has the mantle, and the evidence, courtesy of her Dad and Beth, to prove she is who she says she is. Plus, she has Alpha fighting skills - though not as strong as a warrior, so can probably hold her own in the challenge circle, with her "surprise" powers. Plus, I think her gryphon will not let Jessie lose. So it'll all come to a head. As I said before, only way this can end in peace is if the remaining Richards die - if they are left alive, they will continue to scheme to get the Richard mantle. Killing them - as horrific as it sounds, will eliminate the problem - forever.

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I am sure Helen is reluctant, but she needs to be prepared to immediately demonstrate her strength probably through wiping out two packs. In a culture that lives by strength of arms, there can be no other way. One pack will just rally ppl against her. She needs to deal with several simultaneously to show it was not a bluff and gain respect.

So looking forward to seeing this carry on! It's an interesting story with the perfect number of twists and turns. Keep writing ☺️