All Comments on 'Werewolf and God Wars Ch. 01'

by Divway

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Slofred almost 4 years ago

A solid start. A bit more sex than Usual for a Werewolf story startup but it is kind of necessary for the plot line you have developed. Sex is the major component to the pack interaction. 5 stars for a good start. I do want to find out how the threesome will work out, and just how the Gods are going to mess with our hero, and his ladies.

tattooed_cowgirl15 almost 4 years ago

Nice start however

you need to double check the story for grammar and spelling errors

Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

Interesting premise

Am curious for more. FWIW, in real life, it's medically impossible for a penis to penetrate the cervix. But in fiction, anything's possible!

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