All Comments on 'Westville High - The Water Park'

Wrong category, no humour, no satire

Just the kind of high fantasy I love.

Does anyone remember the Little Annie Fannie cartoons from Penthouse Magazine back in the late '70s and Earl '80s? This is how I picture Miss Stevens...a bit of a ditz who ends up exposed in public, with her overly-endowed nudity exposed for all to enjoy. Are there any other fans of Miss Annie Fannie out there? If so, Let's hear from you!!

You completely misunderstand Sarah Stevens, as created by Zaxxon. She's not an imbecile, although she is a slut. If you wanted to write a story of a dumb-as-rocks blonde who gets tricked into sex, then do it. But don't bastardize a character that someone else took great time and care to create and develop. On its own, the story is okay for what it is, but if I was Zaxxon I'd be pissed at you.

I have to heartily disagree with the comments of the above. The story was satirical and whimsical enough to get an old fella's jollies going. I commend you young man, for everything.

That story was so ridiculously stupid it just killed the sexy mood. For a story about a big-titted blond babe taking it in the ass, that’s an exploit…

By the way, being able to trick somebody so blatantly brainless is not being a genius. Just to say…

Even though it was a parody, I really enjoyed the Westville High series..thanks

I don't believe this was authorized. To be frank the quality was thoroughly sub-par if not bastardized. I always look forward to more Westville high stories, but not this way. All I think is that there is a steep fall from between say this story and a Zaxxon story or a Georgetasker. Did not mean to put anybody on notice, just my $0.02.

Was this authorised?

More, please. :)

great! keep it up!

I really liked the story but your version of Miss Stevens seemed to different from the normal.

You should continue into a full series, exploiting the rest of the cast!