All Comments on 'Wet Hot Eroshire Summer Pt. 01'

So good! Do you have patreon so I can support your work!

So this was one of your best works yet. The breeding sex, the build up, the fucking. It was pretty great. The only constructive criticism is that you kinda repeat their convo while their fucking. I get it's mainly cheating sex but constantly here he's better and bigger then her BF got old other then that? Greatness.

Personally didn't like they were talking about her getting knocked up and getting rid of the kid kinda kills the breeding sex a bit.

While this isn't better then A Weekend Adventure it's still a great piece of erotic storytelling. Can't wait to see the next chapter. If you write breeding sex I'm def gonna read it!

Please continue part 2 with the MC will have ffm threesome while their oblivious boyfriends were waiting outside... I have this idea that the threesome was the boyfriends' deep wish but actually the MC will have it instead..