All Comments on 'What a Job Ch. 02'

Mostly well written and laid out but seriously in need of an edit.

1. "He asked me as he pointed towards a room medium sized storeroom in the back corner of the warehouse "

2. " I had never have imagined"

3. "You probably should go out and grab the purchase orders from the front desk, and why don't you the catsuit on."

Some readers may be able to skim over errors but they are a speed bump to my brain. Sorry.

Why does she stay with Dave? Can't be love, is she just so mercenary that she stays for the security the marriage offers?

so, is she just rob's? or do the other guys get to play too? since she is parading across the warehouse in a sex suit.

Great story. Looking forward to the next chapter

I didn't think you could top the last story! I hope that we will see another chapter soon!

I hope not another nine years before the next chapter. soon I hope

How about another chapter. What is she going to do if they start marketing maternity clothes. Hmmm, could get interesting. Hopefully there will be a third chapter.