All Comments on 'What a Trip Ch. 01'

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tenbears43tenbears43about 12 years ago
Great start!

Keep going, and I look forward to Bob's further adventures.

JohnnyRottencrotchJohnnyRottencrotchabout 12 years ago
More! More! More!

Excellent beginning and character development! Can't wait to see if Auntie has a kinky streak in her and ties her nephew up and milks him dry.

VacationWriterVacationWriterabout 12 years agoAuthor
More on the way

Two more parts are in the pipeline now. At least a couple of more after that. Glad you're enjoying it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
SORRY

I was enjoying the story but it is rediculous to write a story and shut it off that quickly. Sorry but if you are going to write a story, write a story.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 12 years ago
Started very well

On to chapter 2

VacationWriterVacationWriterabout 12 years agoAuthor
Anon

Anon- I'll take that as a compliment. Others might have worded it "I look forward to the next part."

DashDotDashDotalmost 11 years ago
An Aunt's work is never done

Sometimes an Aunt has to be a teacher.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Sorry, I never read a sequel...

...and was hoping for a story, rather than just an introduction.☹️

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