by RonCabo
Well written and I liked the coincidence part. Sex was well written and no huge cocks or massive tits to go from reality.
If it hasn't happened to you it could do so.
I'm sure we'll have some anonymous people slagging it off later.
5 stars. Thought the length was perfect. Really enjoyed the series. I went back and read the earlier chapter. Great also.
wow what a great story. you are a very clever and talented writer. i think your stories are always well-told and creative. this one certainly is. i know someone complained about the length - i thought it was perfect!
i love reading your stories. you are a clever and very talented writer. and your tales have good twists and turns and always keep me interested. 5 stars. great work!!! and a lot of fun!!
I liked it a lot would like more let them do it all I mean it all.
...I would love to see these characters take the plunge and have that vacation.
Again, first-rate characters are what pull people into the story.
Top-drawer.
5*
Great followup and conclusion, but a continuation would be great. Both the original story and this continuation were well written and get my 5 star vote. We can only hope that RonCabo starts writing more of his stories since this last story was over a year ago.
Yeah, this is a story I come back to as these characters are really likeable. Good job.