All Comments on 'What Are We? Ch. 01.5'

What the fuck is this about?

If you are planning to drag this out you had better change your mind. Short chapters usually do not cut it on this site. Combine what you write for the next submittal into multiple chapters or you will lose the interest of any one trying to read and follow your storyline.

Your title could read: What Are We . . . Waiting For?

This is very cryptic , I am confused and not aroused lol

Not unkind words, it is the truth about this dreck that is unkind.

I read boath storys so far and love then your doing great so keep wrighting and wright what you want . and have fun with it I like storys like this I will score this a 7.

I like the slow build up, she is his mother after all, can't wait for more!