by Andyhm
Not at all well developed. Even though there is a twist here, you have to search for it. Three stars.
JPB
Confusing read and I’m still unclear about what happened. Has great potential though. 3 stars since I don’t know what happened
Totally frigging lost me on this. Who Tina is,is never explained but I'm assuming Sara's daughter? So we get Sara and Carlo, then Lucy goes around the corner to confront Sara and what happens? Who the fudge knows?????? Just a terribly written story.