All Comments on 'What did She Say?'

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Not at all well developed. Even though there is a twist here, you have to search for it. Three stars.

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This premise deserved a longer story and a better conclusioon

RileyKingRileyKingabout 2 months ago

Confusing read and I’m still unclear about what happened. Has great potential though. 3 stars since I don’t know what happened

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Totally frigging lost me on this. Who Tina is,is never explained but I'm assuming Sara's daughter? So we get Sara and Carlo, then Lucy goes around the corner to confront Sara and what happens? Who the fudge knows?????? Just a terribly written story.

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Jan 2023 I’m afraid that for the foreseeable future I’ve had to put hold any work on current and future stories on this site. There is so much going on in my life currently that I’m unable to justify the time I spend writing short stories. Hopefully this will be a temporary h...

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