All Comments on '"What Does She See in Him?"'

This story was fantastic! The sex scenes were hot, the premise was fun and that little bit of mystery was intoxicating…who is Laura and who are the “others” she briefly mentioned?

A must read! I’m ready for the next part.

WOW!!!!!

Great. Made me extremely horny

That was incredible!! At 65 i doubt that will ever happen to me, but a guy can dream 🤫😁

I would love to have a fling with a teen femboi. Experience and explore our secrets and deep dark fantasy come to life. Might be start to a long drawn out saga. Needsomeloving1968@yahoo.com is waiting.

dating in the 21 st Century

💖💖💖💋💋💋💋💋✌

what a way to lose your virginity

I love the whole story to build up everything and me looking for my first time at 59 I hope it happens soon I can't wait for it to happen to me

Laura reminds me of a great girl from my youth that taught me so much about myself. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story.

For me, he agreed to bottom too quickly. It kills the realistic feeling. Straight teen would run away, not stayed and sucked and bottom. C'mon, bending does not happen like with a touch of ✨ magic wand.

This story was amazing. Other than the great sex, I REALLY enjoyed Andy’s inner monologue.

Totally awesome story. Almost like the first time a t-girl topped me. Was AWESOME.

I would love to meet a girl like Laura, really great story. Love the way you write.

Well done and after reading this I will slip my anal plug in and jerk off.

Any story that references American Psycho [with white walls and classy, post-modern art and sculptures all over the place.

I could totally see Patrick Bateman (from American Psycho) having the exact same living room.] s excellent!

Great story, quality editing and your storytelling created a great image in few words. I think the shock was a little underplayed, and it would have had more emotional realism to have her work a little more to convince him and/or prime him.

As far as the comments about gay vs. straight, the story is skoliosexual/transfan.

Correction for Anony "straight men don't like to be penetrated."

"Homophobes don't like to be penetrated." Or at least they say they don't.

No, I'm not gay, nor have I ever been pegged, butt...

Mmmmm man I would love to find a lady like this. I would like to experience sucking her cock and then having her take my virginity as she fucked my ass! Such a turn on for me.

Good story

Love the build up in the high school. I can actually see it happening or should say I have seen it where miss popular starts hanging with not so popular the evil looks and comments come out

I would lime to see if it leads to a relationship or just a weekend fuck

I like these stories that have a brief setup, and then right to hot and heavy stuff. That’s why I read erotica in the first place.

In some of the comments, the question came up as to whether Andy, a straight teenager, would quickly agree to submission. But, let’s face it; folks who likes transgender/ cross dresser stories prefer it that way. Otherwise what’s the point of it?

"Straight men don't like to be penetrated."

Oh really? Explain that to all the straight men who do.

Straight men don't like to be penetrated. Be has mad as you want to be about that. Also feel free to fling more buzzwords. It won't change the facts.

This was a fun, quick, and sexy story, which I enjoyed immensely. It was very well written, although it did seem like he was magically flipped from the doggy position to missionary, but maybe I just missed something.

However, now to the reason I felt the need to comment: the "confused" person below me. Clearly they lack an understanding of the nuances of gender, as well as sexual predilections, which don't necessarily have to go hand in hand. A girl can enjoy/prefer to be penetrated or do the penetrating, just as a guy can. And a straight guy having sex with a trans girl is still straight, no matter the kind of sex they happen to be engaging in.

Sorry, it just bugs me when people say sleeping with a trans girl/guy is gay. Seems more than a bit homophobic to me.

There, my short rant is done. Again, very fun story. I look forward to reading the next half! :D

How did he go from straight to immediately wanting to suck dick and get sodomized? Oh right! Because this is yet another futa story where the girl has the biggest/best cock and never ever bottoms. But how is she not just a dude with tits at that point? Why do none of the guys in these futa stories ever actually want to penetrate a girl? Anyways it seems these stories are more like gay male fantasies than anything else.

It was great this time, too!

There are some great CD/TS stories on Lit, and I gotta say this is one of the best.

Great storytelling. Love hearing what a character is thinking & feeling -oh, you nailed that. And they actually care for one another, so it's emotionally connecting, as well. All that ties together to make a great, sexy story.

I already know there are more chapters. More later. I hope you always find time to write -for Lit, or wherever. Talent like yours deserves to be shared.

Not for me. Feel a bit sick.

Please continue this story? Would really love a sequel or something.

I assume some things will be explained in future chapters, but having only read this one thus far I was a little thrown. I assumed they were together because he already knew she was a futa, but that obviously wasn't the case. So I'm still wondering how he ended up with the most popular girl in school. Granted, given the title of the story that is the million dollar question. But if he didn't know about her third leg then why does he have almost no reaction to finding out? I also didn't get her, "I'm one of the few" comment or why her dick had no veins. Seems like you set a story in an alt-reality, but left out all the world-building that usually goes with it.

Now all that being said, I still really liked the story. There isn't nearly enough of these kinds of stories. I just wished there had been a bit more exposition to flesh things out.

I love getting fucked in the ass. This is a great description of what it feels like.

I liked that.

Most excellent start

I loved it. Certainly a story that got me all hot and bothered. I'm lookin forward to see where this goes next! Great job!

Very well told and so hot. I loved the progression and the character development. It led up to such a climax. Still wet.

xoxo, Di

Would love to see some follow up

Loved it, the writing style the depth of the characters (main and secondary) and the accuracy of anal. I myself am dating a trans girl and yeah I can attest to some of this stuff. Loved it and hope to see a second chapter.

Probably can see why Wallis would be pissed, the basis for this thought is that see said "she loves buttfucking guys" so its a given that she has slept with a few boys in school. Laura's friends are probably like her, maybe why that girl tried to warn him. Certainly hope to see a 2rd chapter but i hope that Laura is with Andy because she loves him rather than wanting to add another notch to her bedpost.

Wow. Just perfect! I haven't cum so hard like that in a long time! Please continue!

Cool story! Really like that she seems like a girly girl but still a total top.

Think the guy went a bit quickly from not knowing to getting his ass pounded, but who knows how you'd react in that situation.

More! More!!!!!

I only WISH I could truly empathize with him. If I ever found a TG who could do that for me I would give up on everything else. I think I just discovered I might be a bit of a bottom. I need chapter two: feed me!!!

You nailed perfect butt sex...chapter two please!

It would be a dream come true to live this and I've never thought of having a trans girl fuck my ass.

That was SO fucking hot. I loved it. Loved the characters, the build up and the way you described what they were feeling. I really cannot wait for more.

We definitely need more of these two!