All Comments on 'What Doesn’t Kill Me…. Pt. 01'

Good start and already intriguing!

Please! Another chapter

Best story on or off Literotica I've read in a long long time! Keep up the good work. Love the quotes, keep them coming. I have copied some that I have not collected before to check out.

Lost interest half-way through the 2nd page. Just started on her adventure and she's already having sex. Not enough buildup if this is only the first chapter. 2* but a good start.

Oh wow. I am so impressed. Wieliczka

As Mary Poppins said, "Well begun is half done." This is an awesome start to what has the appearance of a truly epic tale. I hope you have the stamina to keep up with this all the way to the end of the journey, where ever it leads. You have a real talent, Feshta! The flashbacks you have woven into the story are very skillfully done. I look forward to learning more about Jade and Chelsea's backstories as well as being treated to glimpses into the people that Jade will meet, just as you did with Stevie.

weird!...intriguing...

Thanks to all for the feedback. Good criticisms are always welcome as long as they’re not trolling.

Too quickly to the sex, feel like she needed to heal more beforehand. Makes it all so cheap and tawdry.

Great beginning!

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