All Comments on 'What Got into Mom Ch. 02'

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rem556rem556almost 2 years ago
DAD?

In ch.1, Tom's father was Killed and mom mourned heavily for quite a while. I was taken aback when you wrote about nothing being said about mother being penetrated by other men once his father came home. It's only sex. Then later it was acknowledged that dad was indeed gone. It was confusing for a bit. Other than that, I really enjoyed the story!

dnick47dnick47almost 2 years agoAuthor

Adv9ve noted and appreciated. I'll do better watching my storyline.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

So momgoes from religious batch to incestuous swinger?wtaf happened and where's the daughter during this time

Stormwalker10027Stormwalker10027over 1 year ago

This was tough to read sooo many typos! Use spellcheck!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Loved it waiting on more 5 stars !!!!!!!!!!!!

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