All Comments on 'What Got into Mom Ch. 03'

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shadracht over 1 year ago

The pacing is weird. The dialog and narration don't flow very well. The scenario is kind of hot, but it feels like mental whiplash jumping from Uber religious mom to fucking her son, to fucking all the women in the family, and being swingers, and now being an escort? And where did the sister go after chapter one's beginning?

Anonymous9 months ago

Loved it

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