All Comments on 'What Happened'

Right away , from the very beginning , the problem is the victim character is portrayed as very dumb, slow witted, almost self-destructive. Would a wife to a husband with such traits as described in the beginning answer " I don't know where I am or what happened to me? And then no report to the police? Not going immediately to the hospital or a doctor to check herself out?

It's "bawling". Get a dictionary and an editor.

Not sure why were you looking for a fast ending, I enjoyed this story but I'd rather of been further invested with additional parts added on

Sadly, I did not consider this posting to be a story. A jumble of words? Indeed! But certainly not a story. The characters never developed, and their behavior was unrealistic at best.

I wish that I was capable of providing constructive criticism. I guess that I have fai!ed as a reader...