All Comments on 'What Happened? Ch. 02'

by RBC86

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 6 years ago
Very nice incorporating sisters

Sisters often like the idea if making little brother a man. They've seen him naked so much it only natural.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Eh

There is no flow; very choppy. **

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
Do guys really ejaculate

on the floor?

And all over the person they are with?

???

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
What the hell??

Mom not wearing pantyhose?? No hotels?? Why do the siblings always have to be included?? Have Mike and mom go on a date.. hey a hotel and he pounds her all night long

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Pantyhose please..

RBC86RBC86over 6 years agoAuthor
Patience is key!

Please just bear with me. The first few chapters are just setting up for the fun that is about to occur over the holidays. The real fun will start once the dad returns and mom and son have to sneak around to avoid getting caught. For the guy asking about pantyhose, that's not my thing. There are several authors who specialize in that, so you can read their stories if that's what you want. This is only my second story, so again, any suggestions are welcome. I am still learning!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Can't Wait until more cums

Keep it going can't wait until more cums.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
When it is mom and son though..

You make mom sexy.. have her dress sexy for her son.. I never had the opportunity with my own mother, rather my ,then 23 yr old sister.. I was 16 actually and she taught me how to please a woman.. she ALWAYS wears tan colored pantyhose..omg sexy.. no woman should ever be without them.. I love the feeling of her legs ovrr my shoulders so I can play with them and her high heel pumps.. she is still married to her husband and they have 4 kids.. 2 I know are mine.. we still get together when he goes to work or out of town.. She's now 29 I'm 22..

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
just for fun

O YOU BOYS AND YOUR HANG UPS; can't you grow up? Your ALWAYS the same. "OH BABY won'T you please wear stocking for me???? pleassssse" ... We go to hell and beyond to keep our bodies beautiful to excite "you of the smelly armpits and bulging beer bellies". Most of you don't even have jobs and never will have and besides feeding and allowing you to make "LOVE" to us you always need just a few dollars or a little gas money and on and on then on top of all this and a lot more you want us to suck your god awful smelling tiny limp childish looking pricks. I'll go without thank you, SILK SLIP

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 6 years ago

I love the series so far. Can't wait to see what happens when dad and Natalie get home!!

beanburner69beanburner69over 6 years ago
next

who's next Aunt, or other sister, maybe this one

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I gave you 5 stars

This is really getting very interesting. It's ok that Chelsea is going slow for this time.

Eventually she will keep on thinking about it and when her husband goes out of town again, she will go back to her parents house and will try to suck her brother's big cock.

Then she'll be excited when she actually watch her mom and her brother fuck. Then she'll eventually let her brother lick her pussy.

Then Natalie will eventually be in the mix. And while the father is out of town again, the four of them will be nude around the house and swimming and playing nude in their pool. They can also be openly fucking.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Potential Lost

So its an orgy now, is it? BS.

Chapter 1 one was super good. Chapter 2 fucked up & ruined it all.

I'm done with this series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
5 fucking stars

I gave you 5 stars. This should move forward to a full-on harem situation. Transfer Dad to Europe for a month for work. Mom, Chelsea, Natalie, and Aunt Jessica all need his huge cock constantly like total nymphos. Everyone gets pregnant. But keep going at this same pace it flows well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Awesome!

It's great, more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great

Where's part 3? and 4?? I want to know what happens with Chelsea!

RBC86RBC86over 6 years agoAuthor
More chapters coming

I am trying to finish the whole story before publishing any more chapters. I don't want to keep people waiting a month between each chapter. So if you could just bear with me for a few more weeks, I promise you won't be disappointed. Thanks!

rodavrodavover 6 years ago
Cool

Thanks RBC86. I'm excited to see the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Fun-cest

This story is so funny I've been in tears. Not REALLY an incest story. Incest is just a ridiculous sex premise and it works well. Any older woman younger man with red tape MILF-age works. I think it's cinematic. Could be a short subject R-rated film. You should screenplay this. The dialogue and interior monologue are both priceless. Great timing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Natalie

In the first chapter you said that Natalie went to an out of state college.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Ignore the shit comments

You are a great writer, much better than most writers here on Literotica that just writes quick stories without backgrounds

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Very nice 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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