All Comments on 'What Happened Next'

Well well what a clever little minx you are, fantastic please continue

a beautiful story.

Loved it, sweet and so hot. Well written I believed every bit of it.

Sexy story, good buildup, lots of detail. Look forward to the next one.

wow please keep writing

I keep waiting for father to bring a helper maybe a sister. You must know if father finds out about your deception, the church has a penance for redemption

I like the way you build up the tension. It makes the sexual act much more interesting. Keep going.