All Comments on 'What Happened to Alice'

A great concept... well concieved.... well done.... good luck in the contest.

Amazing story! Great use of the nude day theme. Very compelling and sexy with a blow job to boot. Congratulations in advance because this is definitely a contender.

It’s starting to get embarrassing!

Readers like you, who’ve written a very good story by the way, plays fair while another cheats.

I just wish this D.K.MOON guy, with his huge ego, would be man enough to enter his stories according to the contest rules. But he thinks he’s too good for that!

Good luck in the contest,

Which is where I like to find stories! Well written, paced and included enough twists and turns to make it very interesting. Thank you.

That was an interesting story, just about brought me to tears at the end, very moving!

As a fantasy this works because we can see into her thoughts, in real life it would have been quite sick, as it was, delightful.

A damned clever story, that. Well told and logical.

Great descriptions. "Loose tits rolled out like flapjacks at the church breakfast" has got to be my favorite. But even better was how you made the unbelievable believable, then acceptable and even erotic! But do you think Alice is going to be nearly as ornery and fun now that she's starting to fire on all cylinders? Hope so! Thanks and good luck in the contest.

I was amazed at how this unfolded. Brilliant and endearing.

Not really finished.