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Click hereAs she began to thrust faster and longer, Malia found herself instinctively talking to Carmina the way Jack did to her. "Oh-Yeahhh, take it all for me, baby. I'm going to fuck you so hard." Then, as she recognized the girl was approaching climax, she continued the dirty talk. "Do you want me to fill you up with my cum? I've got so much spunk ready to blow inside you that you're going to develop a little tummy." Malia said patting the girl's flat stomach. This idea of being completely inundated by a man's load made Carmina begin to climax spastically.
The two laid in the bed for quite some time before Carmina had the strength to return the favor for Malia. All the while the two women mouth kissed and caressed each other's bodies.
And this is the story of how PR Max got the Rancho Desnudo account; because sexed up employees are happy employees, and happy employees are productive employees.
You got bored with this and just wrapped it up as quick as you could, didn't you ?
That's not what a good writer does.
Very, VERY disappointing ending !
Talk about a big build up and then nothing.
How can you not finish this, but just leave us wondering what happened over the next 3 days ?
Up until the end it was worth 4 stars, but I'm only giving it 2 because I'm so disappointed.
1. Good character description, for all of them. Real people! The usual reader already knows, has already met all the types described in the story. There aren't only super-humanly-beautiful-strong-and-hung here!
2. Good build up, description of the situation, relationship dynamics and overall effort to make everything believable as a real life situation. Stories in which every character is naked and already has sex in the first paragraph are so boring.
3. uh-mmmm dude! MORE!!! wtf!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!
Keep up the good work, man
Well, the ending is a bit botched and it literally cries for a follow-up.
Brilliant - When will part two cum along ?
Very hot story although, what happened the other 3 days, this story has some much potentual, and it needs to go there.