All Comments on 'What Happens in Her Office'

by Systematick

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

So well written, it draws you in and just as you are well and truly hooked it drops you stone dead and feeling very anoyed and wanting much more from the story.

More chapters required to bring this to it's proper conclusion, much too good to be left hanging.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Looking forward to a sequel. This could turn into a lovely romance.

SystematickSystematickabout 1 year agoAuthor

I wasn’t thinking about a sequel, but now I feel like I have to continue for you guys. 📝

MigbirdMigbirdabout 1 year ago

Intriguing as intended. Yes, you end here despite the possibility for more — so open to possibilities/different directions. Have read other pieces around somewhat similar scenario that explored romance. As a near hopeless romantic … .

FandeborisFandeboris3 months ago

Intriguing little story. Could have gone for the BDSM label.

SystematickSystematick3 months agoAuthor

@Fandeboris I missed the label.

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