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by TheDok

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Is she "Valentina," or "Mary?"

TheDokTheDokover 2 years agoAuthor

Oops. Poor editing. I would like to say she had deliberately changed her name but that would be an untruth.

Hiker66BikerHiker66Bikeralmost 2 years ago

Good short story. 4 stars.

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