What Happens in Vegas...

3 ⭐ ... That's all that I can do . Both of them were Cheaters, nothing more, nothing less. She should have already been out of her last relationship before heading for Vegas. He shouldn't have went to meet her, or split with Terri before he caught his flight. No romance here ... Just lust as was mentioned several times. A sad tale that ended with a unplanned child.

Great characters, good story. 5/5

Excellent this is a story were the sex complements the plot were the characters a fully fleshed emorionally. this one for aspiting writers use as a blue print

Kinda hoped the story ended by both of them being hit by a bus.

I love your stories, they're amazing, but there's a special place in hell for people that go through that much to fuck around on their spouses, or just cheat in general.

You never fail to turn a seemingly sad tale into a happily ever after. This story (like everything else you wrote) has just the right amount of everything. I mean that. I sincerely hope & pray to see more of your work(s). Please, please, please write again. You have one fan here who will eagerly be awaiting your next story...

Your female characters tend to have a hole in their head.

All of them make ridiculously stupid decisions.

I wouldn't even have called this a romance. There was nothing but sex. Ok im sorry, he took care of her for a couple days when she had strep. But she also told him she felt sick and her whole body hurt and he fucked her? That is not believable behavior to me. Yeah they made each other tingle but there was still nothing but sex. Every time they needed to talk they kept putting it off. There is no romance or relationships without communication. This is almost entirely a stroke story with a bit of plot to glue it together.

Definitely like this story although I feel that "Impersonnating Brianne" is better. What truly amazes me are the negative posts. This is Literotica people not necessarily the real world. Enjoy it for what was written. To the people who critized the "taking of the Polariod" at the airport, it's called foreshadowing. It is a technique to tell you that they will end up together. It may have been a little late in the story but it clearly signalled the outcome. As far as the ending, I think it could have been slightly better developed but I can see her thinking that her tryst has run its course and wanting to distance herself from the memory. If nothing else than to insulate herself from continually being hurt. And keeping the child a secret makes sense since she didn't think he would breakup with his wife and she didn't want to be the cause. For them to go their separate ways, breakup with their partners and then reconverge makes perfect sense. At least this way each party is making an independent decision unencumbered by external pressures. Enjoyed your story. Sorry you've stopped writing.

I am sure the person who came up with the phrase "What happens in Vegas stays in Vegas" was an adulterer. Why do people think that a place like Vegas or anywhere for that matter absolves you of your commitment to your partner or spouse. They are nothing more than a couple of cheater, this is not some sweet innocent romance. The worst part is her letting herself get pregnant what a stupid slut. I gave it a "2".

Lonewolf2013

Goddammit, I cried reading. The story develops beautifully: not too hurried, full of realistic confusion, agitation and fears, lending to a more urgent atmosphere in having the two individuals have themselves lost in the moment. Beautiful.

Great story with an amazing cast of characters! A sizzling must read. Loved the ending, thank you for writing such an amazing story.

Always-

Scarlet Butler ;-)