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by Haulover

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Loved itHtrst

Great read. Two more paragraphs on the trip to the nude beach etc. I was captivated. Thank you.

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 7 years ago

I want more! Please keep writing!!

thigh_highthigh_highover 7 years ago
Nice writing

I appreciate stories where the author has a command of the language ... you definitely do. Thanks for a well written story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Continued?

Very well told and believable. Would like to read at least one more chapter. Lot of possibilities in this story.

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I'm a long time reader of quality literature and erotica, but a new writer here. I've been published in mainstream fiction (hard copy) and in business journals, and have a relatively successful corporate career. My wife and I are committed nudists and have been happily marrie...