All Comments on 'What Happens To The Broken Hearted'

More of an erotic coupling than a romance, everything happens at light speed. Both are broken hearted, one recovering from traumatic abuse, and within a very short time they are trusting and romantic.

Dreary, trite, stiff, predictable, rushed. I could probably summon several other adjectives, gut it's not worth the time or effort. 2*

Too short. There was plenty of room for further character development and way more story to be explored. It would make for a decent start, but as is it's incomplete.

Good story!

4

Very nice story and well written. 5/5

Overcritical, your name describes you perfectly.

Then, when people click on your name, they discover that you have never actually written anything worth reading, and that includes your evaluation of my efforts.

Still, I am always willing to learn, so feel free to publish your works and show us how a good story should be written.

A great read.now I've got to add your works to the reading list.cheers

Would have loved to see her pregnant...

Still 5