What I Wish Could've Been

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With that now becoming customary wicked smile and or smirk she replied, Oh he'd have to be a wicked son to neglect as willing of a mother such as I." As I slam home all the way and lean forward for a first "lovers" kiss.

Without words after that kiss with the look in each others eyes we both knew "This is the start of a beautiful mother and son relationship. That didn't end just in my bedroom. But also ended in the game room, the game rooms deck, the sitting room, the guest room, the master shower, the jacuzzi, the kitchen, the living room, the big outside deck, the pool, and basketball court. Had to be quieter outside but that made for an extra thrill to the already spicy relationship I have now with my mother.

(A few months later, on a sunny Saturday afternoon)

Unbeknownst to my mother and I, while I was helping my mother with some good old SPF Stiffy Juice(if you know the reference, 🤘props) that the other female of the house was getting hot and bothered by what she had just witnessed.

Thinking to herself "Did Jonah seriously just fuck mom on the lounge chair and cumshot her back and rub it in?! WTF! How did this start?! Who started it?! How long has this been going on?! Does dad know?! What should I do know?! Should I confront them?!

Jane heads inside to the kitchen and snags a beer from the fridge, and leans against the island to think about what she just saw. Also to think of what she's going to do now.

While outside I'm getting ready for round numero does in the spf Stiffy application. Apologies after the first application, it takes a bit of time to supply the needs for a second application. ;)

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If you want to see possibly more of Rebecca and Jonah and a possibility of having Jane join in one way or another. Drop a comment. I'd Honestly love the feedback.

This is technically my third story but the first I finished. I have a different story in the pipeline based off a Dream I had in the incest category. I don't even have a name for it yet. Just as soon as I woke up a spent a hour or two going over every detail I could remember which was most but woke up at a unsatisfactory moment, but revealing that might ruin the story.

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"Simple man" Lynyrd Skynyrd

If you can do me a favor.

Call or Text your mother and tell her how much you love her.

You never know when it will be the last. And be thankful that you still have her in your life.

And feel something for the ones that don't have them in their lives anymore.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Part of the sexual relations were good but too much detail in other parts. Would like you to write more with mother and put a little sister in as well!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Awesome story please write more with Jane in the mix!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

racfguyracfguyover 2 years ago
This story was

bad. Really bad.

BTW, what the hell is a hill with Platos?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
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Too much Detail about nonsense. I do not need to know all the blue prints of your house.

Geromino91Geromino91over 3 years agoAuthor

1st. Thank you sp9983 for the constructive criticism. The truth can be harsh at times and I asked for this at the beginning.

I agree I added a fair amount not necessarily pertaining to the story at hand.

This description of the mother is down about 2/3’s on the first page. My mom Rebecca, has short Maybe four inch black hair. green/brown eyes. average nose. without lipstick red lips. Is five foot-five. one-forty-five-ish lbs. Caucasian. Curvy in the right places with a small belly, but with a large 42D breasts with a bit of sag. Heck she is 48 at this time and still looks good. Below that is the Daughter/sister. Below that is the brother/son and below that is the sister/daughters girlfriend.

I also realize I didn’t have many sexual references. Granted this was my first written story. But it was my second posted story.

I can promise the second chapters too the two stories I’ve written. Have a lot less b.s. as you put it, more story and better descriptions.

I’m just starting and working out what is and isn’t used on literotica. Also I’ve picked out a few editors to beta check my stories in the categories I plan to write in.

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