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Click hereOkay. Starting rotation of the Dodgers ....
To be continued.
- COMMENTS
Ambivalence5 months agoIt would have been nice to know what the author intended here...
Second time through these, at least, cause I keep forgetting it's not finished.
Thwacksy0587 months agoFun to read , going so well , then chapter 9 arrived. Fuck ! Where is the rest of it ? What a waste.
Gamblnluck8 months agoRead 1-4 then skipped to the very end to see if you finished this. Disappointed you didn't. You should have gone until Joan made her play at least. Possibly a short bit to tie it and up and then a short statement that the Captain was about to be unleashed. Wasted the time starting this.
HarleyRider195510 months agoThe story would have been finished by chapter 5 if he had just dumped all that in the head verbiage. Half the story was from “the Captain”.
Lecheman11 months agoHmm no new stories since 2020 - not looking good.
Was curious to see this storyline developed.
myassisdraginabout 1 year agoI would consider it a great story If it was finished.
Maybe he was writing about his own life and pending divorce and fis future ex caught him and made him "disappear"....
I wish someone would take this story and continue it to the end. I have absolutely no skill for writing like this, my production reports at work were my fantasy genre.. LOL
tonyneatoabout 1 year agoI knew this story couldn't finish normally. Make your own ending and improvise.
