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Click hereOkay. Starting rotation of the Dodgers ....
To be continued.
It would have been nice to know what the author intended here...
Second time through these, at least, cause I keep forgetting it's not finished.
Fun to read , going so well , then chapter 9 arrived. Fuck ! Where is the rest of it ? What a waste.
Read 1-4 then skipped to the very end to see if you finished this. Disappointed you didn't. You should have gone until Joan made her play at least. Possibly a short bit to tie it and up and then a short statement that the Captain was about to be unleashed. Wasted the time starting this.
The story would have been finished by chapter 5 if he had just dumped all that in the head verbiage. Half the story was from “the Captain”.