All Comments on 'What Once Was Innocent Ch. 10'

I love all the agonizingly slow descriptions and flashbacks. This story keeps getting better as more of Kayla's previous flirtations are revealed. Garret is is one lucky dude.

While I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, I'm sorely disappointed that Garrett and Makayla still haven't consumated the love/lust that they clearly feel for each other. I'm holding out hope that, in Chapter 11, we will see not the end of a very hot story but the true beginning. Please, please, PLEASE don't keep us in suspense like you did with the last chapter. The sooner it's out, the better! Hell, I'll offer my services as an editor if it'll convince you to push it out that much sooner!

Interesting, somewhat convoluted story. Lots of twists and turns. Too much background and explination. Get on with it!