All Comments on 'What Remains Ch. 01'

This is very short- I guess deliberately to keep the reader engaged for the next installment. I have so many questions, and hope they are answered in the next installment. I am not a supporter of non-consent stories, but without the context of a back story I will give the benefit of doubt for now. May be the "hero" is there to save the captive? I live in hope, but the "promise of pain" does not bode well. If this is just about his pleasure at the expense of another person then you will lose a reader. Chloe

A promising start. Looking forward to next instalment.

Interesting beginning although I am wondering what the “hero” and “heroine” is supposed to mean in the context of the story. I suppose all I can do is wait until the next chapter to find out.