All Comments on 'What She Wants Is You'

You write so well, and this story-line has such hot potential.

You just stopped when it was getting interesting. Pant, pant pant

The second part is just about to be published. It'll be under the incest topic. It's just all explicit sexual action and not any descriptive background lol.

this is a case of the left hand does not know what the right hand is doing or in this case they each wanted the other but did not know it till now

i THOUGHT IT WAS AN OK STORY, NOT SENSATIONAL AND NOT BAD, SOMEWHERE IN THE MIDDLE i Dropprd a line because I am a 60 year old bi fem and I live in Brisbane. The distance from Brisbane to Bunbury is about El Paso to New York, just too dam far mate. Check your map of Aussie, and you will see. But good luck anyway.....Jules from Brisbane

I am really pleased that you have allowed the codes to be easier to read. I have vision issues and sometimes I just cant get through

wow step mom sex with daughters so cool.

Gosh! You really need an editor or at least a good proofreader.

As is, it’s very distracting.

Bill S.