All Comments on 'What The Heart Doesn't Know'

A good start will look for the next part

You need an editor

Some minor writing errors, but the beginnings of an interesting story.

Good Start.. Can't wait until the next chapter

A couple of flow issues, minor grammar and punctuation issues, but a good start to a promising series. If you need an editor, let me know.

I enjoyed this! Please write more :) Excellent beginning, hopeful-looking storyline...I'm hooked, and will be watching for the next page, certainly.

The story doesn´t has connclusion