All Comments on 'What the Hell is Going On?'

somewhat sloppily wrtten story, multiple issues of the fone being taken so slug hubby couldnt be reached, example;;; We found out you had taken your phone when we found it in your room. ;;;. Quite disappointed this couple have actually managed to pass on their genes, wife was a stupid cunt to try this as a means of rejuvenating a marriage, husband was a tiny dickless judgemental fag, to immediately go nuclear. neither deserves for the marriage to continue. But all cunts should keep in mind that threatening to cheat emasculate cuckold or divorce someone w/o your own source of money is stupid beyond belief. 3*. and lucky at that. rk

Not even sure what to think about this and then end it like that 2 thumbs down

the story wasnt to bad but you are in need of an editor! so many mistakes, wrong names used, saying he took the phone when he didnt. 3* for bad editing work

1. As even the story pointed out, no way to know that she didn't cheat.

2. Even if you for a second believe her, what she did wasn't a "practical joke". It was a clear cut **emotional abuse** and **mental cruelty**. Those are valid reasons for divorce even legally, never mind morally and practically.

3. one star off for the usual garbage trope of children ALWAYS sticking up for female parental unit, even when she's the offending party. That's my least favorite part of LE LW stories.

Thanks for your writing.

I really enjoyed this! Nice ending . . . nice use of timing as the mechanism that could change a terrible prank into a terrible tragedy. Neat twist in the end as he (hopefully) realizes his joke was also more than she could handle, and could have had horrible repercussions.

Neglectful husband and dizzy wife, yeah she was dumb but he was a fucking child.

And a bad stoy whimpers and dies.

Why would she want to stay with an arsehole like Harvey?.Apparently all he has got going for him is the ability to drink lots of beer,as well as being good at farting.

what was missing was the usual questions about the relationship of the "cheating" pair prior to the prank. Why would Doug help? Was Dougs wife aware?

I love how even though it's obvious that the entire premise of the story is just a prank gone wrong that the paranoid schizophrenics that populate the LW comment sections still insist an affair was going on.

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Asides from that, this is actually one of my favorite LW stories - no actual infidelity, but it touches deeply on the ideas of trust and respect in a marriage with a hint at the potentially dire consequences when you choose to hurt the one you love.

Nutters the lot of them. When will people learn, you don't pull these kinds of pranks on people you claim to love? I mean the ending suggests she was very close to suicide because of what she thought she'd done. That could have been such a dark ending from a stupid prank.

1-star. The premise was okay, but the story just fizzled out at the end.