All Comments on 'What to Expect'

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MesraMesra7 months ago

Nicely written! finally after all this time. Thanks for the joyful treat.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Good story. Needs a chapter 2 where Amy joins the club of the other pregnant girls at school. I wonder she will keep it and forgot about going to college with Jill or will Amy give it up

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Really liked the story except for one minor detail. The guy said he fled Spain to avoid paying child support. That shows that he both won't stick around to help her with the kid and will likely shy away from supporting her financially. That shows he really isn't the best guy to get pregnant by.

ScottishTexanScottishTexan7 months ago

I totally lost interest in this when Amy's piece of shit fuck buddy suggested that he blindfold her to play roulette. Risky sex with someone who LOVES you is one thing. But she was obviously nothing but his toy, a plaything that was his entertainment and not a part of his soul or heart. I didn't bother to read the rest of this story and skipped to the end so that I could leave my opinions here.

But then I read the comment posted anonymously about the piece of shit leaving Spain to skip out on child support. 🙄 I wasn't going to vote until I read that. So I backed up two paragraphs from the end and confirmed my suspicions. Amy let's the deadbeat Alonso knock her up. So you wrote Amy into making stupid choices. 🤔

Accidentally getting pregnant can be sexy as hell, but not by the scenario that you created. 1/5

lastboyleftlastboyleft4 months ago

nicely written piece of art except for fact that i highly doubt that alonso would ever stick around for her. why do such boys even exist. If you can't man up and take responsablity then just run away before messing up.

mathur_nkmathur_nk3 months ago
Irresponsible to promote teen age pregnency

I know this is a porn site but still some responsibile behavior is followed. Like no child pornography. Promoting teen pregnancy, that too in a glamorized way, should also be a strict no. Even if it is for girls of 18 or 19.

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