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Communication, Communication, communication, folks. That's ALL it takes, from BOTH sides..... BUT, I will say that when I've been told that we HAVE to separate, then my radar goes haywire. Just saying.....

What is this bruised ego bullshit so many authors make their women tell their men? Her being with Richard was feeding her ego. Her knowing her husband hates Richard and then kissing the man is disrespect and feeing her ego. It's all about her ego not his.

First off, why would anybody just sit there and let someone talk to them that way. Why would you take someone out to eat ,then let them call you stupid the whole time.

What a crock of shite…..

1. Skank wants a separation with " ABSOLUTELY " no communication?

2. Kendoll runs to a lawyer Now I Am Protected I Am A Kanye I Am A God….

3. Skank moves out .

4. Kendoll should have served papers then. The utter disrespect shown by skank is off the charts.

20 years of marriage my arse….. Just a wannabee Cuck Author with shite in brains

Badly needs an epilogue

Many authors on Literotica rush the ending, this is another case where 4 stars could have been five with a little more character development and an epilogue

…my intuition was that these people, who had been married for “almost 20 years”, had no idea how to communicate their feelings. They certainly knew how to hurt each other, but when that’s the main message each party has perfected, it’s not a marriage, it’s a life sentence.

Most of your stories revolve around the MC throwing barbs and invective, then shutting down the return communication channel. Delete all messages and emails, change your phone number, move with no forward, etc. I’m sorry to say that that behavior is more typical of junior high/middle school. Those of us who haven’t outgrown the behavior (I won’t say the emotion; I think we all have those aplenty) tend to be a problem in society. If nothing else, they certainly tend to have major difficulties in relationships.

Hey Dawn, stand up. The MC then lays a torrid hot lip lock on Dawn on front of Ann and Dawn reciprocates. No problemo. Right? That’s all Ann did with Richard. Sorry but no. Kissing Richard was cheating. Period. Unless MC and Ann both agree that passionate kisses with other potential lovers is not cheating. As usual in these stories the MC is made out to be a wimp cuck type character. If it was me, I would have filed for a divorce when my wife demanded a “temporary” separation. She didn’t want to be together anymore. Fine. Her choice. But I’d have choices too, and that choice would be to divorce and move on.

Two morons that somehow stayed married for 20 years then nearly self destructed. I know he hates Richard, and not sure what she was thinking, but if the worst he saw with PI following her for two weeks after being separated for four months was her going out twice (allowed by the contract they signed) with an asshole and giving him a good night kiss, after she spilled her woes on the guy, then that is NOT bad. Though as a husband I would like to know why she wore the LBD. That being said, the bigger thing is her asking for a separation and the two not communicating, as she just hoped he would miss her and cave, hence her lack of communication. Of course he settled into a similar mindset, with the difference after 2.5 months, he thought their marriage was soon to die. Backfired on Ann who wanted him to seek her out and chase her. Stupid. Dawn played the role of rational.mediator seeing their idiocy on both sides and gave then a dose of reality. Glad they made it. But they really should have amended rhe separation agreement to mandate counseling sessions each week. Their lack of communication and digging in their respective heels is mind numbing to read. Also she would knownthag he despised Richard. Her going out with a random guy or a friend twice, even with a goodnight kiss, is not the end of all things given he is talking and dining with Dawn regularly. The LBD though, that would bug me. There is always the possibility that she was in fact cheating but then why after so many months did nothing much happen with PI. Yeah maybe she experimented early and didn't go as expected, but that doesn't seem likely her given (a) she probably told the girls why, though not her husband, for leaving, (b) she thought it would be shorter term before, but since he didn't come running, it became 4+ months, (c) her reason was that she felt taken for granted and not desired, and wanted the old "absence makes the heart geo fonder" nonsense to help their marriage, (d) PI saw next to nothing except that it was Richard she went out with, and (e) Dawn is like an avatar of the author telling both sides they are idiots, and so what she says is essentially what the author wishes us ro believe. I personally would not be so blase about accepting a separation and if it did happen, would be a lot more confrontational about communicating and demand counseling.

"How can you accuse me of cheating after all these years?" - He didn't accuse her of cheating, he just asked if there was someone else.

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I know we're only getting his POV, but are their daughters giving their mother the same shit their giving hi,?

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I still think he got and took too much blame. SHE dropped the separation bomb without ever saying anything about a problem.

Two stupid stubborn asses. He was as much to fault as she was.

Good story, well written.

Divorce is the answer for these two. Divorce and him moving to Antigua to be rid of his wife and daughter.

I would point out that she showed me disrespect by leaving, by dating Richard, and I wold say she cheated and no way she can prove it. As someone else pointed out it was the black dress,. The dress she wore to impress and one she knew she looked hot in. If all she wanted was someone to talk to she would have just gone for a coffee someplace. She went on two dates with dancing and kissing.

Divorce for certain and then if you still want her start over with dating but he should go out with others as well.

Still a very good story about a wife and daughter that I do not like.

Yet,another wrong ending story.He should have gone through with the divorce.Instead of telling him how she felt and seeking his input,she decides to separate,where is the logic in that.?

Nope. Agree with his original actions. Selfish bitch who dated another man.

MEh, no cheating.

Better than some of the shit you have written and NOW I have read every one of your stories (jaybee186)

Another constant is that they almost all seem to be named Steve Moore.

It sure that I would’ve given her three weeks to find herself.

Enjoyed the story Thanks for your writing.

Funny how Ann didn't realize the risk of Steve becoming increasingly pissed in the 6 months she was 'finding' herself.

The misandry ran deep in Slirpuff.

…she never would have gone back for her black dress. She would have picked out something casual out of what ever nice set of clothes she already had in the new apartment and worn that; not gone to the extra trouble of looking “hot” for an ex-neighbor.

smh... sounds like a millenial.. woman cheats man gets mad, its his ego.. no its bein pissed they broke the vow to each other, forsaking all others.. las in no other person but each other..

Ann cheated on him and never did apologise to do it... It does not matter they got separeted, they were still married... I would go with divorce. She is a slut bitch...

Ann was a bitch. She refused to tell Steve why he was leaving and then had the audacity to go out with Richard, knowing that Steve hated him. Then Dawn tried to give equal fault to both of them. Did you notice Ann never di apologize for going out with Richard. And his daughters are obviously the same ilk as their mother. Didn't deserve more than a three

Seems to me a divorce would be happening.

3 stars and only because some parts were funny - the rest sucks.

Just one of the best 4 **** stories ever posted here.

I am surprised that Richard did not press charges against Steve for Assault and Battery. Why did Richard leave? Is Steve some master fighter or what? He suckered punch/kicked Richard, that does not mean Richard is not capable of dealing with Steve.

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Pasqual

What was Steve supposed to do when his wife wouldn't talk to him?

After a short run of not so good stories, here's one I enjoy.

Another one of the authors tales about a married couple who don't talk to each other but instead go for the nuclear option. Good amusing story. Shame the author isn't still publishing

Please tell me that people are not this stupid⭐️⭐️⭐️

Just divorce the dumb bitch

The Dawn character made this story unreadable. I hoped that an airplane would land on her head.

Dawn was a fun character, and even though the story’s editing was still imperfect, it’s not egregiously bad (which is what I have come to to expect from Slirpuff).

Here’s an alternate title: “Darkest Right Before the Dawn.”

Four stars.

She runs off to have an affair with his enemy and he is happy to eat the cream pies when she returns.

Full of the much overused "male ego" crap and "dumb men" crap. Even fiction reinforces stereotypes you know.

common sense, love, trust, loyalty and brains go out the doors, a window is way too small. TK U MLJ LV NV

She exhibits ALL the signs of cheating. In fact, when she dated and KISSED another man, enemy even, SHE CHEATED!!!

Sometimes Slirp just cannot help herself, she lets her mask slip and her misandry comes shining through; she loves humiliating men. She believes she's subtly teaching us that women are superior to men in every way, she's desperate for men to acknowledge it.

No sale. Nobody's drinking the koolaid here. Good luck Slirp.

Husband and wife both pig-headed, so, despite any evidence or proof husband convinced of wife's cheating, files for divorce, refuses to talk to anyone rationally, tbh, deserved to be on his own, doesn't deserve a wife of any kind, can understand why she left, she should have stayed gone, piss poor story

she leaves, their daughters are on mom's side. Everything is his fault, he isn't doing this. he isn't doing that. Blame, blame, blame him. And if she a Dr. she's a piss poor one.

Don't agree with the ending.,She left and should been made to stay left.

So, i want to make sure I have this right

The wife consistently refuses his advances for sex, then gets upset that they never have sex, leaves him for not giving her enough sex (which she was always refusing anyway) and decides to date other men to make him jealous?

Must have someone in her past that she hates for some reason. So if she were to find out Steve dressed up in his best, was going out with her and saw pictures of them kissing, her 'little female ego' wouldn't be tweaked just a tad bit? He was correct in forcing a legal separation on her as self protection as well as changing the locks only when he found out she was sneaking around as it turned out. She was doing it with Richard which she sure as hell knew was wrong. So why the hell is everyone in this story ganging up on the husband? She wouldn't tell him what her issues were, thought he should move out, would certainly expect him to have to pay the bills because she just needed to 'find herself.' Seems to me she should have been seeking him out instead of everyone blaming him for not talking to her. Any experienced lawyer and I've known and talked to a number of them will tell you if they are honest that the vast majority of the time when this happens with either men or women someone else is waiting in the wings. If they are talking to a man they will also add that maybe they haven't quite done the nasty yet but it's going to be happening in your bed while you pay her to do it. I saw a boss of mine going through this exact same thing years ago, the only one more shocked than the rest of my coworkers and I was him, nobody could believe she would have an affair with someone in her office, their daughters were devastated and begged her not to do it to no avail. I'm just wondering who Ann's slut friends were that convinced her that all of this was a great way to solve their problems? Maybe Richard was in the picture a little earlier than she let on? Slir, I suspect at least some of this was tongue in cheek humor and I enjoyed that. Signed: BTW

Bullshit "counselor"

I'm a big whore look what I can do, I can fuck up my marriage too!

But that's ok because I married a cuck!

I'm a bitch whore now!

Funny, but with some good insight on communication between husband and wife.

Tongue in cheek,

Entertaining.

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Paul in Oklahoma

so who really wants to listen to a psychologist that belittles her own husband like that, give marriage advice? and I agree with Just Words, the wife's actions were worse. and no you can't go out on a date, dancing and kiss your husband's nemesis! really? lol

It seems that you can be married but go out on a date, dance, and kiss someone and it’s not considered cheating. I’ve missed out all these years. Why is it when a man gets upset about his wife doing things with another man she shouldn’t be, the husbands reaction is just a bruised ego and he’s pathetic? When a woman is upset for the same reasons she’s justified? Hypocrite much?

Where is the cheating line?

But hey this is just fantasy right?

Find a crack, drive wedge into it and watch it widen. Think she was the dumbass #1 but he sure didn't help.

They weren't equally wrong. Moving out and going on dates was absolutely the most stupid choice either of them made. There are better ways to reconnect. However, it was very well told and sadly believable.

Wife was the driver of the issue; seperation with no explanation.

Refuses any effort by her husband to figure things out.

Dating someone her husband despises and she knows it.

Her behavior was beyond deplorable.

Everyone was against the husband. Either there is a big piece of this story missing or the author just wanted a husband to blame irregardless.

husband DID TRY to win his wife back, many times.

husband DID TRY to listen to his wife, but she FUCKED OFF to la la land.

Everyone took the slut's side. Even if they insult her, they take her side because they tell the husband that he shares fault.

The fuck everyone here is smoking? The husband....read my words...is the ONLY party that tried to win her back. Did he call her everyday? NO! Why would he? It's not a 'bruised ego'. She up and left him to explore single life. She could have MOVED INTO ANOTHER room if she wanted space. She didn't want space. She wanted freedom to fuck around. To flirt at the very least. And no one should be condoning those actions.

Sooooo, I'm convinced the author is braindead, or is very very clever....and created a bunch of sicko characters that gang up and manipulate a man that by every definition of the word TOXIC...has a toxic marriage...and NEEDS to LEAVE.

Don't waste your time trying to change Lue's mind. I've tried many times to argue with her/him/them and never won. Lue is totally convinced that cheating is a cute, harmless, deserved, part of every relationship as long it is the female and she enjoys herself. Anyone, like me, who disagrees with her is a moral misogynist. I enjoyed this particular story very much and enjoy any reconciliation that is earned. I admit that I have an intense aversion to cheating without consequences stories. This is where Lue and I clash philosophically as the Lue feels no cheating should ever have consequences and I think any cheater should feel the fires of hell. I think we both agree that cuckolds have no place among normal people. Just enjoy Lue, I certainly do, for who they are and argue with the wind. You will win more often.

It doesn't matter who cheats, the man or woman, it is wrong. By the way, it's not just straight people who deal with infidelity. I have known many gay & lesbian former couples who split because of cheating. This "fragile male ego" crap just further divides our society. There are many differences between men & women (Vive le difference!). If someone betrays your trust the relationship is probably doomed. Look, you may have an open relationship that was agreed upon by both parties but most of us value monogamy and fidelity. You do you, let everyone else do them.

She “makes” the story. Else it would have been an ok story.

5-stars & Favorite

I rarely, vefy rarely, give anything but positive comments.

Put a couple of really bad stoies here myself so that I felt like I could comment. I m not the anonymous type tho it is true I use a handle here.. wanna know about me, theres a way to message me via this site.

Bad. Really bad.

You walk out that door, I won't be here when you get back. Not saying I'd be happy, but I will be gone.

be thankful for someones common sense...

"fragile male ego". There is a strong sense of right and wrong and of justice. The childish ego trope is just a feminist bullshit way of trying to distract from outrageous female behavior. Women wallow in emotions regularly. It's far less frequent with men.

you are a cuck who cant satisfy his woman and need to find a way to justify her fucking around on you

Newsflash - the problem isnt you, its your cheating whore of a wife who CHOOSES to not stay faithful to you

Man up, dump the cum bucket and find a woman with enough moral fortitute to not treat you like shit

You'll enjoy life so much more when you dont have to spend all your time trying to justify women cheating because your partner is a cheating bitch

The moment she walked out the door, in fact, it would have been a cold noon in death valley, if I let her in after her even bringing up the separation.

Any similarity to any story, living or dead is accidental and unbelievable. This is World-class RUBBISH. The technical writing was OK but none of it made any sense, or was it just outright satire? To write a reconciliation at the end of such a fantasy is worthy of an LSD trip! A question I pose after a lot of stories here "where was the 'loving wife'. I read the propaganda about 'western cultures' and fragile male egos in another comment. THAT was worth a Pulitzer Prize for it's complete lack of maturity and knowledge of human nature. I think this author is female, I have no issue with females. I have a very sensible and competent wife and two intelligent and capable daughters, all of whom I would hold equal to any man anywhere in this crazy World ... but I do believe this story was from deep inside a troubled female psyche! If this author is married, I shall pray for your husband, If single, I understand why! I didn't select any stars' as there was nothing star-worthy in the whole mess!

No wife of mine is going on a 4 months leave kissing on my hates enemy!

SB often makes comments like this, about women being just as hurt by a husband's insensitive behaviour as a man would be by a wife's insensitive behaviour.

Of course it is so. There is a range of reactions to the things our 'significant other' may do -- for both women and men. Some decide to feel hurt where others may make a different decision.

I think the expectations society has placed on boys and men over the years are what makes the difference, and what has led to the so-called 'fragile male ego'.

Western cultures are only just moving beyond the idea that wives are possessions, and a man who doesn't make a retaliatory response to a wife's infidelity is seen as less of a man. Men are taught that is how they should respond.

It's not that long since it was accepted that men (especially the wealthy) may have a mistress and his wife should accept that as normal. Expectations are not yet equal on men and women. A woman who doesn't make a retaliatory response to her husband's infidelity is less likely to be subjected to the same criticism that a man would. Women aren't taught to upset themselves as much as men are.

Lue

It's been a little over a year since I last read this, and don't really have the inclination to read it again, but I want to sound off on the "fragile male ego" bullshit.

So, if a husband wanted to date other women, including the wife's enemy and/or a hotter woman, HER ego wouldn't be hurt?

Or, as we've seen in other stories, isn't having a younger, handsomer, more virile or richer man wanting her the boost to HER ego which usually drives her to cheat?

Any story featuring the "magic therapist/psychologist" and "male ego" cliches is an automatic 1. I don't mind reconciliation, but this was drivel....from an otherwise excellent author.

It was a good story until the last three paragraphs; stupid men need wise women to help them thru life.

Steve. get a new wife and a new female friend. The ones you have now aren't reliable.

He should have had her served as soon as she asked him to leave the house.

This was never about trying to get her husband to give her more attention if she was dating other men on the sly. Dating another man was bad enough, but a guy her husband hates and has actually had a physical fight with? She couldn't have picked a worse guy to fuck around with... it screams disrespect and disloyalty.

As for the daughter siding with her mother, she acted like a complete bitch. The husband was the innocent party in this... his cunt of a wife instigated the whole mess. Reconciliation or not, his relationship with his daughter will never be the same again.

dont know if author had a cock or not but this shit was written by an old woman

Pretty good story, but I'm losing my BTB edge reading these stories. Glad that I enjoy a good reconciliation too.

I quote,

"I'm not saying that you didn't get me off, you never failed to do that. But I wanted more, I wanted romance, I wanted tender loving, I wanted the whole thing.

Are you getting the message?

I, I, I, I, I, I, I, .......me, me, me, me, me, me, me .....I wanted, I wanted, I wanted ........

Why is he still talking to her?

Why isn't he divorced from her yet?

Why isn't he out of the house yet?

Buddy, get a life, another life, well away from her!!!!!!!

Dawn's right. He's stupid, very stupid.

Another wimp.She wanted her space ,songs should have given her it full time,especially after the photo of her aunt the enemy.

I never would have made it to the end of the story! When the wife walked out for no real understandable reason,I'd have been fixing the financials,having the lawyer getting those papers together quickly, and planning my escape! And if it got to the point where I saw her kissing my arch enemy,I'd have moved far,far away! ~ This ending just doesn't go with the flow of the story! ~ This had BTB written all over it and yet pussied out! - (And that Dawn,why the fu*k would Dipshit put up with her insulting,loud-mouthed opinions?! Psychologist? Try psycho! (And the PHD stands for Piled higher and deeper!)

Writing is supposed to provoke a reaction in the reader. It could be tears anger sadness, and a million other things. This story however is simply a tale to two people who are in mid- life crises. First of all the wife is so damn dumb that a box of rocks has a higher I.Q. No man on this earth is going to put up with this kind of nonsense, that is if he is worth his salt. The woman, Dawn, doesn't fit in the story at all, and she has no idea of being a psychologist. My thoughts about this poor man is that he should have gone ahead and divorced his wife. Clearly she wanted someone else.

The wife was a dumb shit, but the daughter was a real bitch! At the least, they were both horribly immature. I'm glad I don't know either of them.

But she also heaps shit onto her father, and like all the shittest stories on here, there HAS to be a reference to the fucking male ego. Because yeah, how DARE your sensitive ego not allow you to be okay with your wife dating? ---- Fuck you!

She's a hideous daughter, and Ann going out on a date with ANYONE was a dick move.

Time to take a good SHIT.l.

I know you say you have an editor, but you really need someone better. With some basic grammar and spelling skills.

I don't want to go on a rant, but:

Sherri was all "Mom says she never slept with him either"

So her view was that her mother was dating, but it was OK because of where it stopped.

How come Sherri's idea of helping was to be verbally abusive to her father rather than clue him in on the goal of her mother's game? I'm certain that she knew, that her mom had explained it was all about her dad's poor mind reading skills. That's all it takes to put her on her mom's side, in my sad experience.

Bruised ego? Like women want a man without an ego? Or a man who supresses his ego, who a wife ends up leaving because he's so boring?

Daughter confronts him and says it's about a bruise ego because her mom was dating someone he didn't like? A real person would wonder about mom dating ANYONE. Being married takes you out of the dating pool.

Only a cum guzzling cuck would believe that shit. This idiot slirpuff makes the husband out to be the bad guy. His wife went on a date with his worst enemy and he’s the bad guy. Fucker

women need dumping.

Story was typical man hating rancid cuck shit. Typical literotica sewage. I expected better of you Slirpuff.

She should have included her husband for a threesome. 2 stars for this selfish wife.

They got divorced. Ann gets embarrassed at the end and there's no way she stays and talks to anyone. Horrible RAAC.

If she was still married, why the fuck was she dating some guy that she knew her husband hated for wanting to fuck her? Bottom line is that married people don't date other people so our hero had every right to dump the cheating slut and he should have. Now he'll always wonder, "did she have sex with anyone during those months when she was totally free?

Then 6 months he discovers her cheatn on hin

A woman dressing up, going to dinner, and giving the man a kiss just had a first date.

And yes it is a big deal no matter what the psuedo psychiatrist says.

Thank goodness for a sensible woman,getting them both to see what idiots they were.

from Ann and Dawn. As soon as Dawn said "ego" he should have told them both to go to hell and left. Richard needs some adjustment. A few broken bones should be a teaching moment.

Your little ego

Your sensitive ego

Your ego talking

etc.

Our pathetic male ego keeps being singled out as something that only hurts relationships.

However, what do they call a man without an ego? A beta male, and we know how attractive betas are to women.

I usually like Slirpuff's stories, but this one just pissed me off. It seems like everyone was crapping on Steve even though he didn't anything to deserve it. He didn't even go on dates even his wife did. It's weird that an author who got screwed over by two wives, would be so hellbent on blaming Steve for his wife's deplorable behavior. The best thing for Steve would be to dump Ann, write off his daughters and start a new life.

Considering how crappy Ann treated Steve, it doesn't make sense she would suddenly become a sexual dynamo unless she found out Richard was so bad in bed that she desperately realize what her husband was a better lay than she thought.

"I felt if I was gone for a while, maybe he'd appreciate me more when I came back." -

MIGHT make some sense, except that she wanted HIM to leave!

I sooo enjoy your comments. You're one of the few commeters with a "name", that says things as they are and don't chicken out and kiss the writer's butt. You took the words out of my mouth. Of course, the writer can buy all the bs that came out of the wife's mouth but to me it was just a lot of Dr Phil and/or Oprah crap.

One things is for sure, there is no real love in the relationship he wrote.

Ann made mistake after mistake and wound up making the worst mistake a wife can make short of blatant infidelity. She knew how much Steve hated Richard. Richard was nothing but an arrogant, lowlife loser. What would Ann have done if Steve had shot and killed Richard? Steve would have done serious time in jail for ridding the world of pure scum. And it would clearly have ended Steve and Ann's marriage. There was no limit to Ann's stupidity.