All Comments on 'Whatever You Desire Ch. 03'

Your usual good job!

5

Great series. True erotic thrillers are a rarity on Literotica and I think this is one of the best. My only constructive criticism is that I think the ending wrapped up a little too quickly but all in all, still 5 stars

My goodness! An incredible ending….just love , love your stories…

Thanks, Michele, I needed the fix! <3

Amazing" Very well done!

A wonderful story - tense, edgy and, in the end, heartwarming. Congratulations.

I liked the story and the characters.

I first thought that the first customer for Julie would be the CEO who raped her when she was in college.

But the senator and his henchman was very dramatic and led to an exiting ending.

Thanks for a romantic whodunit. 🤔

Excellent, I agree, erotic thrillers are rare.

Have you considered writing a novel? I think you're up to it.

another brilliant one Michelle, I was worried you had dissapeared after an unfavourable remark on another site. Never let anyone who cannot figure out the difference between a well written piece of fiction and unsavourary real life upset you. Noticed that this one had quite the sugary ending, hope your not going all Mills and Boon on us, your fans xxx

A great story that must of taken a lot of effort to research and write. Thank you for your endeavours. It was a pleasure to read.

good story I love to see trans women finding love that they deserve

Another home run for MN! Your stories happen to have a lot of alternate life situations. But your stories depend on developed qualities of the characters that are not dependent on what they were born with (or without). If I said that right.

Great job.

a well woven story. your depiction of Julie quite absorbing as a transgendered female relating to a heterosexual

society and its transphobia. enjoyed it.

I loved it, like I do all of Michelle's stories. Too bad Camden wasn't as engaging as this when I lived there.

Michelle

You never disappoint always working in the love story.

I don't know whether you have time to look on fetlife page pics and videos from our Friday night party tngurl37217

So now it's been a few years of dressing going out in public I am retiring in January when travel I will probably present female most of the time thanks to the encouragement from wonderful ladies like you.

So do think there's any chance an old lady like me will ever experience love like in your stories.

Gabby

I really love your stories. I have read pretty much all of your writings, some of your work has even made me come to tears. Keep up the amazing work you are my favorite author.

Good job! I've been following your work for years and I think this may be your best story. Good characters, nice plot, hot sex, you had it all.

I first read you on Chix, where you posted some good stuff. When they got all censorious there I found you here. Your stories keep getting better. Well done! xxx