All Comments on 'When a Plan Falls Apart'

Great awesome but more ass lick for the white boi.

I enjoyed the story but reduced it by one only because it is misplaced. It belongs under fetish or perhaps IR.

Barf

Total crap and you aren’t even smart enough to put it in the correct area/heading. So everyone a favor and stop thinking you can write. I doubt you can sign your name correctly.

Reverse enslavement - payback?

Nonsense

Two wrongs don't make a right. Enslavement is nothing if not regression leading to greater division, hatred, retribution, extinction.

Stereotypical racist claptrap scores 1/5