All Comments on '​When Family is Not As They Seem Ch. 01'

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HottieOlwenHottieOlwenabout 1 year ago

This is a great taster of what is to come. Or should I say 'cum'? Lol! Really looking forward to the next installment. 5 stars for this opening chapter.

beth1957beth1957about 1 year ago

Looking forward to seeing what happens next. This is great.

blackknight314blackknight31410 months ago

A very confusing story. First... what kind of names are these. They are unpronouncable in English. You can't tell if the person is... has a cock or pussy. They are obviously an incestuous family but we don't know shit about any of them.

I gave you a 4 on the strength of your other works that I have read, but if the next chapter is the same as this one... I'll nove to the next story on the list. I have no idea at all what this story is about.

Thanks for sharing.

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