by evrtxn
Very sorry to see the end of the story,but hope that they come back in some cameo tales later,will be waiting for your next tale in the future...
Fantastic! Loved the whole story, well done! Looking forward to more from you.
Beautiful. A lovely romance that was well written and paced. Thank you for such a great story. I really liked your Carla character. The reference of her speaking like an A-10 was funny.
5/5 for sure
J
First I’d like to thank you for the Bahamas storyline. Fictional or not, I was worried when you wrote they were going there. Tourists get targeted. Young, female, beautiful women alone are serious targets. You were very realistic with the attempted date rape drug, and I’m so glad Gina caught them and they were busted!
This was an unusual story for literotica, compared to many I’ve read. The details of their daily lives really showed how their love grew over time. They faced challenges, and overcame them. Mostly it was a sweet, easy read with a beautiful wedding to finish it. I truly enjoyed it, rookie, and hope you continue writing. Thank you
Hated to see it end. It was quite an enjoyable story. Looking forward seeing more from you and hopefully some more from these two.
SB
A beautiful end to a beautiful tale! I'm looking forward to seeing what else you can write. Five stars!