All Comments on 'When I had a Fall'

1. Hate cheaters

2. Hate poorly written crap.

3. Love an author with an editor.

For those reasons, 1 star

Can't even spell 'wife' correctly in the tags. Always a bad sign.

I enjoy debauchery. So liked the story. But I think you could have made it more erotic.

This reads very well considering the author isn't a native English speaker. I hope the old colonel uncle enjoyed many more hours with his penis in Sima's mouth and pussy. I hope she enjoyed it, too. Keep writing, it's a good story.

I would love to be uncle and turn her around and fuck her from the rear both holes.

My preference for out of marriage sex makes it one of my favourite stories. Keep writing more.

Amazing story... Loved it.... Please continue and make a series.

Wow! Really hot stuff. Keep writing.

It's just amazing.

The author is hot. Her imagination is erotic. I feel as if she penned her experience.