All Comments on 'When I Was Ch. 02'

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chytown about 5 years ago

Thanks For The Read***

You should have kept it one chapter. You lost something in chapter two. Still a good read. Thanks for sharing

Anonymousabout 5 years ago

Excellent

I have enjoyed both chapters. Keep up the good work.

linnear about 5 years ago

Nice

Very nice. Short and sweet and I look forward to reading more of your stories.

tallman441 about 5 years ago

Good story

Don't listen to the negative comments. Does your story need work, of course, but if you do not write it will not get better. I like where this story is going. Just keep writing, and reading. As your read other stories, you will see where you can improve yours. Looking forward to reading the next installment.

Smoochint5555 over 4 years ago

Great story

Nice story. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

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I recently lost my muse! She would e-mail some of her experiences and once in a while, send a photo of her to remind me of her looks, and i would build a story around her! some were private and some i published. Now i am in search of a new inspiration. If any lady or ladies wo...

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