All Comments on 'When Irish Eyes Are Smiling Ch. 04'

thankyou, thankyou. this was great, better than great fantastic.

can't wait for the next chapter....soon please :-)

...as I read the story it seems that paragraphs are missing. I'm not sure if it's incomplete editing or a uploading problem, but there are several paragraphs that only have the beginning of a sentence. It takes away from an otherwise good narrative. I suggest you get a better proofreader.

Hey, Tom Collins here.

Sorry about the uploading problem that we had with this chapter, no one knows what happened, but the damage has been fixed now. So, here's to your reading pleasure.

Cheers,

TC, 3113 & Jus

Very hot gay male tale. Tom and Jus apparently know their gay stories. As a bi man, I can really appreciate this category, and I give this chapter a 5.

Excellent tale, in any case. I am glad that they are doing this series. Gay stories seem to be a talent of theirs.

I am particularly impressed with the way that 3113 blended her style so well. I can't wait to see the outcome. :)

Script

Wow, 3, you have written absolutley seamlessly. You and Tom have written a tale that warms the readers heart. It makes them want to know more about Joel and Dev. Not to mention they way sex is so smoothly interspersed and so seductively written. Really great job, I'm grateful and thrilled you both are continuing this tale.

this story is making me 'curious'. very well written, great character development and most of all H-O-T sex. maybe im a bit bi. i guess, that's what an erotic story does.

Kudos!

Hi, it has been a while since I visited Literotica and I went straight to look up TomNJus as I really loved their story about Devlin and Joel. I was sad that it seemed to stall last year, so I was absolutely thrilled to find new chapters to this story upon my return! I still love the story and am impressed at how well 3113 is able to take over - but I can't say I am all that surprised since 3113 has written some of the best stories I have come upon on this site. I can't wait to read the next instalments. Thank you for continuing this wonderful story!

I love how Joel has that effect on Devlin, and how slowly he's taking things. But, oh! poor Devlin finding out all that stuff about Eric - Dru

Revelations on every turn, first Robbie, now Katie. I don't know who's more of an emotional wreck, the characters or me.

Revelations on every turn, first Robbie, now Katie. I don't know who's more of an emotional wreck, the characters or me. Devlin should know that turnabout is fair play.

Absolutely beautiful story. You can tell Dev and Joel love each other but have such trust issues.

I can certainly tell the change in the writing patterns also the change in BOTH personalities. I'm no longer interested in reading any further sadly. But I really enjoyed chapters 1-3.

You can just leave instead of being an ass, Anon 6 years ago. Way to be so cowardly to drop that kind of comment wayyyy later compared to the other comments.

Well, lucky for you, you're not getting away from this scot-free. Go be delusional with the "change in personalities" and try to be less of a jerk with all those years.