All Comments on 'When One Day We are Gone Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very good chapter. But I can't wait for Cassie to start Dominating Lily with Syn's help..

Qwer12Qwer12over 1 year ago
Taxing

Another wonderful chapter that was taxing to the sexual mind. That was a fun hot scene with a nice twist to it. Hot. Looking forward to seeing how far Cassie can be taken into darkness. Cheering for Lily to become more controlling and twisted. So much Debauchery to be had. Rock on the fun and neat twists to the story. Thanks for you time. Cheers

SomaSlaveSomaSlaveover 1 year ago

Great twist at the end. It looks like the story is going in an interesting direction. I hope it arrives where I think it will. Brava!

aznlookinguyaznlookinguyover 1 year ago

Extremely well-written and intense. And then the ending was delicious.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great chapter this is getting better and better it is feeling like we are heading towards Lily becoming Cassie's bitch and what great revenge it will be!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

When will you be uploading the next chapter?

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I’m amazed these “ladies” in wobbly old high heels didn’t break their ankles trying to struggle with gravity and inertia let alone another person

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At last we begin, and from the smallest of things: a mistake. Cassie asked for the free will to make her own choice at the end of Wonderland, but she did something unexpected. Instead of keeping free will for herself, she gave it to her nemesis, Lily. Now Lily is free to wand...