All Comments on 'When One Door Closes'

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I typically don't like cheating stories but somehow, this one didn't piss me off. I think 2 less pages would have gotten the point across just as effectively. And a follow-up where Leslie shows up to his door after filing for divorce would have been sweet.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

no cheating warning text or tag? instant fail.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I also do t like cheaters, but the circumstances in this tale made it understandable. I found myself wanting to read more of theee characters from please.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

This is a wonderful story, but would be even better without the cheating element.

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