All Comments on 'When Opportunity Knocks'

Erotically genuine and beautifully written. A perfect ‘first time’ story.

The story halfway (after the tub) went from 'she' and 'her' to 'I' and 'my'. Also, houses have shutters, people do not...

That's it? We need to talk? Nothing more?

Otherwise, a great story, but it needs more

of a finish. Not long. One or two more pages.

Your delightfully delicious erotic detail is arousing to the Max, brilliant stories, had to slow down the stroking to enjoy the full hot story moments, love to read more, seducing younger girl, or boy, threesome, your writing is so exquisite and explicit and Hot, excited for more from your fantasies or Experiences...Thank you for sharing!!!!